Sela Locke

See, I'm not one for nitpicking, so I'll just tell you what I think. I liked it. It definitely needs to be longer, and you should proofread it for typos ...

First off guys, thanks for your advice and comments on the story--they're appreciated. However, I think I ought to point out a few things you missed. “The crazy illusions – ...

12+ for mild swearing. Not sure if it'll become a romance, because I'm pretty sure this'll just stay my small moment of freaky brain-vomit. Please skip the nitpicks, and if ...

There's something nagging at the back of my mind about it, and since you wanted honesty, I'mma try to figure it out. Does it feel insincere? Or maybe it just ...

Rated 16+ for some sexual content and nudity-ish. No nitpicks--honest opinions please! I could hear the guard and Sergeant Kulpeper – or so they called him – arguing beyond the ...

Mildly confusing. No nitpicks please, and I beg of you, don't ask questions when they even might be answered later--unless it's absolutely crucial that they be answered right this second. ...

Hullo! I'm Sela A. Locke and I...will be your reviewer today. First off, you're rushing everything! The entire story is telling, telling, telling. He did this, she did that, he ...

A while later – and considering my situation, it is surprising I managed to gauge the time at all – Narryck paused in his tripping and crashing through the forest, ...

I'mma be honest--I stopped reading after about a paragraph. Wanna know why? Probably not. I'll tell you anyways. It's called a hook. Something that, from the very start, draws the ...

Huh. Well, so far this is pretty generic, right? A shy guy who like a girl but can't tell her because she's too pretty, or too popular, or dating some ...

Well it was cute, that much I'll give you. But of course I have about a zillion questions, 'specially because, well, I love Star Trek. First off, why did Captain ...

Minutes passed, and every once in a while there again came that crinkling, spine-tingling sound as page after page turned. Once I thought I heard a voice mumbling along to ...

I'mma be short about this, okay? Here's my honest-to-God opinion. It could be interesting. This could be exciting, intriguing, heart-poundingly fantastic...if it weren't so choppy. Because it's very,

I was in a forest. Before aught else, I looked down to survey my clothing. A sound much akin to a piglet’s squeal jumped from my mouth, and after that ...

It smelled like fresh paint and old books, and maybe a little mold. There was a man in the back corner reading a comic book, because he thought he was ...